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THE SCULPTRESS

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Mrs. Collins stood~ feet planted and arms crossed, ruling the rows of wooden desks with a yardstick’s sharp tap-tap. Her eyes were stern as a rock, her voice a blade, trimming the frayed edges of our attention. Her hands—knuckles broad, could silence a room with one raised palm, or mend a skinned knee with the same precision. We feared her, yes. but when she bent beside my desk, her starched blouse whispering of starch and lavender, with pleading eyes I pointed to my 7 written backwards~ She did not say, You wrote it wrong. Rather, she said Let's try again, gently holding my fingers as together we rewrote the 7 At recess, she watched us like a mother hawk with a nest full of awkward chicks. When Bob cried over a lost marble, she knelt in the gravel with him sifting through the rocks until she found it~ not his, but close enough. Years later I stand in my own classroom, mirroring her stance: feet planted, arms crossed, waiting for the rustle of fidgety bodies to still I hear her when I say, Look at me when I’m speaking, feel her in the way I smooth a crumpled worksheet before handing it back. While grading papers under a dim lamp, I press my fingers to my temples~ her exact gesture and wonder if she knew she was sculpting more than cursive. You may read the accompanying memoir vignette at poetrysoup.com/short_stories/the_attic_the_report_cards_and_mrs_collins_13600
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Gauthier Avatar
March 24, 2026 at 12:28 PM
Wow ~ beautiful. Added to my FAVE's. Fabulous title !! S7L3 smoothe
Hind Avatar
February 9, 2026 at 6:40 PM
I like this. I didn't know you were a teacher!! <3 Wonderful, you must be a good one
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