The Scream: Edvard Munch

fragility of reason ~ ululates upon brush strokes of despair

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Lin Lane

Date: 7/18/2023 12:55:00 PM

Would that screams and howls emitted by the tongue through the mouth rid us of fear... No comments on your Monoku until now brings a click to MY tongue.

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/19/2023 1:26:00 AM

Thank you for your suggestion Lin, I’ll definitely give it a try, :-)

Lin Lane
Date: 7/18/2023 2:29:00 PM

You excel at them, David. You’re right about being away. Out of sight (site) ~ out of mind. Here’s a challenge… write a limerick about it or anything you choose. I find them addictive and once you start you may have to stop yourself!

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/18/2023 1:51:00 PM

Heya Lin, No definitely won’t rid us of fear but might help release a bit of the exasperation; no comments is the norm on the soup, especially after being away for a few weeks, the thread usually breaks down for a while, I’m trying to get focused on writing again, but am struggling, the Monoku seems to be my default when this happens, cheers David