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The Scorcher

Screaming drops That of hot sweat Beading on your neck Blasting your body With a cooling system Was it enough Or did you suffer From near heat stroke Did you hurt From the flow Cascading from top to bottom Of your scorched body Maybe more would be best To help cooling the system May the sweat Defeat the heat Of a dire burning day Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/22/2011 7:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Russell. Keep that pen flowing and keep sharing your excellent poetry with the world. Wishing you a wonderful weekend and may it bring you added inspiration as it sails along. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2011 3:03:00 PM
Very descriptive work..Sara
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