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The Scent of Your Soul

The scent of your soul a caramelized breeze of fruit odours reverberating softly through my memory Throwing me right back into ninth grade where we sat side by side Your right arm reaching slightly for my back Your name resonates gently with my spirit as thoughts of you dwell in my mind Carrying me back to the shade of purple grape orchids in evergreen woods Our first kiss perched upon last autumn's twig still lingers in early morn's bone-china cup wafting its pungent aroma of dark roast coffee beans and so the smell of rubber tyres against the wind Such revoked moments of unknown danger and defiant fun Other moments,of beauty and snow angels Of freedom and moonlights,sunrise and life I can still recall the days,months,and years till our footprints marked separate paths Ah,those days,those last hours,How can I forget? Sweet as frosty vanilla and chocolate chips of an ice cream parlour Melting as spongy marshmallows and honey syrup Fresh as the colour of your soul, which haunts me like an alluring glance of almond-shaped eyes This afternoon , like other afternoons I walk to the library which knows the musky sweat of your palm upon my own That fragrance 's gone now.All that is left is the fading perfume of forgotten petals between old books and dust No one here except my silence,and a rotten sliced apple vacuum packed ,lacking its cinnamon and even its spice. Back home,the mildewed strings of a guitar await my fingertips to play once more upon the worn out chords of my heart What will I play,what will I sing ,a song which isn't ours ? Fermented wine I poured into my glass Yearning to taste its purple grape for what it was before all it was turned bitter,acidic and sour I wondered about where you might be ,distant or not as far Listening to my voice on once upon a record player Wishing on a star ?
Not for the contest But thanks for the inspiration Contest name-The Scent Of Your Soul

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/27/2017 7:28:00 PM
Nice, sentiment to reach the soul. I enjoyed so much.
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Date: 4/25/2017 7:03:00 PM
Feelings poured out.poetess is recalling the times spent she cant like most of us forget the first love in our lives. Nicely written Kindly review my works too I'm new to soup.
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Date: 4/25/2017 10:32:00 AM
This is really the best thing I've come across in a while. This made me check out your other works and OMG... You are one of my favorite poets ever... Though me being a beginner would love to hear some words on my poems. It would be an honour if you could check them out and share your thoughts on them. Fan for life, K.Ali. :)
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Date: 3/15/2015 9:13:00 AM
I came and reread the original. I love the added touches you made on the newer version.....hugs Tim xx
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Date: 10/19/2014 2:02:00 PM
Beautiful as always. It was so refreshing to read you, again. A definite enjoyment.
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Date: 10/17/2014 4:02:00 PM
Hi Charm! Your last two poems have been out of this world...it's rare that I fav 2 poems in a row, as in this case. This poem, based on imagery, metaphors and appeal to the senses is so deep in feeling, and I find it so touching and beautiful. Prosit:) // paul
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Date: 10/17/2014 7:16:00 AM
Apogee Angel of poetry, you are adorned in fascination! Chuck
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Date: 10/16/2014 10:05:00 PM
WOWOWOWOW. Why the heck don't you enter it? Come on, Charma. This is brilliant!!! I just love the way you used the sense of smell and taste. GREAT idea you were inspired to do. A FAVE. my only one of the night.
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Date: 10/16/2014 6:24:00 PM
all I had in the seventh grade was secret crushes. sometimes I wonder what they turned out to be and sometimes I get a rare look on facebook. 35 years is a long time. T.S.
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Date: 10/16/2014 5:38:00 PM
This is out-of-this-world gorgeous! I am utterly mesmerized by the way you write!!! You have no bigger fan than this old Canadian poet! Plain and simply, I love you, Charmaine... Jack XXXXX
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Date: 10/16/2014 4:29:00 PM
This is wonderful so many images, scents we could smell, and a good play on the new now being old or abandoned, bitter or rotting. Great write.
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Date: 10/16/2014 12:57:00 PM
oh my, charms...this got me straight to the depths of my heart... your images and metaphors clearly speak deeply... i really think it is outstanding!.. huggs
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Date: 10/16/2014 3:33:00 AM
Dazzling reminiscences that set memory alight wishing yesterdays, todays tobe! Excellent dear, Charmaine!
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Date: 10/15/2014 6:36:00 PM
Beautiful, touching and deep. 'No one here except my silence'....that line alone is so, so special. Great piece.
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Date: 10/15/2014 6:28:00 PM
Simply stunning Charmaine this is going straight into my favourites - wish you would enter it into the contest my friend it is a beautiful poem full of incredible imagery:-) hugs jan xxx Good news from the family - DARREN will be back soon!!!!!
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Date: 10/15/2014 6:03:00 PM
Well Charmaine, this one is a winner in the "Let's just right some damn fine poetry" contest. Masterfully written.
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Date: 10/15/2014 5:44:00 PM
You words flowed so beautifully...Now I'm pining for some chocolate chip ice cream...thank you :) ....Funny how one moment in time can remain frozen in our minds and take on a life larger than our own...remarkable...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/15/2014 5:07:00 PM
oh this is outstanding beautifully penned charmaine like an ocean song dear friend really top shelf piece of writing
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Date: 10/15/2014 5:06:00 PM
Long but you could tell it was about someone real. reminded me of the song by Adele "Someone Like You" it's a song that makes me cry.
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Date: 10/15/2014 4:46:00 PM
Beautiful love...The line touched my soul "What will I play,What will I sing ,a song which isn't ours ?"...High poetic line. Best wishes from.......
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