The Scent of Water

Holy blood and water flowed out from death
Scent of water scattered the whole earth 
Graves torn down, lifeless bodies gained new life 
Heaven opened and lo! Lost church’ rebirth!

Sparkling water kissed the babe’s forehead;
Bless the scent of water the infant breathed!
Now -- spotless, blameless, and of pure heart
Free of sin inherited from frail Eve.

As liquid trickled down his face ignite
Heaven’s radiant light shoots out earth bright,
Spirit dove perched in peaceful glory
Upon him whose soul is the Father’s delight.

Impoverished jar, thirsty infidel
Flamboyant wine filled you to the full
Water gushed out  to quench your  heart’s deep thirst
But the world’s delight cannot sate your soul!

Poor woman kept coming to the town’s well
To fetch water for her daily drink,  till
She asked for the scent of water -- Enough!
Eternal life’s fragrance enriched her soul! 

** Inspired by the Bible and the Readings from the Church Fathers today (7/13/2014)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 18, 2014 at 8:05 PM
you are welcome
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July 29, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Hija, A wonderful scent and win. <3 Congratulations, in Faye's "Out Of Water" contest... Always ~ Linda ~
De La Luna Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 6:11 AM
Thank you, Linda. :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 8:03 PM
you were very inspired by your readings!! I enjoyed this different approach. I am reading so many different styles and they are very enjoyable to see. congrats in the contest.
De La Luna Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 5:45 AM
I am very glad you enjoyed this, Andrea! :) Congratulations also! I love your piece! :)
A. Sharma Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:41 AM
Very unique awesome write Luna ! Congrats on great win!
De La Luna Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 5:37 AM
Thanks, Dr. Upma. Nice of you to drop by, too! :)
Gibson Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 12:27 PM
Thank you for this unique entry in my contest. Congratulations on your winning placement. Faye
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July 24, 2014 at 3:16 AM
Very grateful here, Faye, for appreciating my piece! :)) Thank you for sponsoring such a contest.
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