The Scent of Water

Holy blood and water flowed out from death
Scent of water scattered the whole earth 
Graves torn down, lifeless bodies gained new life 
Heaven opened and lo! Lost church’ rebirth!

Sparkling water kissed the babe’s forehead;
Bless the scent of water the infant breathed!
Now -- spotless, blameless, and of pure heart
Free of sin inherited from frail Eve.

As liquid trickled down his face ignite
Heaven’s radiant light shoots out earth bright,
Spirit dove perched in peaceful glory
Upon him whose soul is the Father’s delight.

Impoverished jar, thirsty infidel
Flamboyant wine filled you to the full
Water gushed out  to quench your  heart’s deep thirst
But the world’s delight cannot sate your soul!

Poor woman kept coming to the town’s well
To fetch water for her daily drink,  till
She asked for the scent of water -- Enough!
Eternal life’s fragrance enriched her soul! 

** Inspired by the Bible and the Readings from the Church Fathers today (7/13/2014)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/18/2014 8:05:00 PM
you are welcome
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Date: 7/29/2014 12:25:00 PM
Hija, A wonderful scent and win. <3 Congratulations, in Faye's "Out Of Water" contest... Always ~ Linda ~
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/1/2014 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. :)
Date: 7/24/2014 8:03:00 PM
you were very inspired by your readings!! I enjoyed this different approach. I am reading so many different styles and they are very enjoyable to see. congrats in the contest.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 7/25/2014 5:45:00 AM
I am very glad you enjoyed this, Andrea! :) Congratulations also! I love your piece! :)
Date: 7/24/2014 2:41:00 AM
Very unique awesome write Luna ! Congrats on great win!
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Date: 7/24/2014 5:37:00 AM
Thanks, Dr. Upma. Nice of you to drop by, too! :)
Date: 7/23/2014 12:27:00 PM
Thank you for this unique entry in my contest. Congratulations on your winning placement. Faye
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Date: 7/24/2014 3:16:00 AM
Very grateful here, Faye, for appreciating my piece! :)) Thank you for sponsoring such a contest.
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