The Scent of Water

In the Christmas Freeze of 1983
Mama thought she lost her Oleander tree
Some called it a “bush,” but at 14 feet tall
Its shadow cast wide on her home’s southern wall

How she mourned the loss of this beloved plant
She begged the Lord for any blessing He’d grant
The freeze ended soon, though her tree appeared dead
The scent of water each day clung to its bed

On January twenty-fourth, the call came
Dad said mom entered God’s heavenly domain
A neighbor had found her, lying in the yard
Next to remnants of a plant she’d not discard

In May a miracle appeared to occur
The strong plant revived, as if waiting for her



*True occurrence based on my mother’s death, January 24, 1984.
Poem written July 12, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 7:48 PM
wow, this one is amazing, CArolyn. What a GREAT story you told with this unique sonnet. I just love this one of yours. Congrats on the winners' list. think I will fave this one too!!!
Lindley Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Congrats on a fine win my friend! A very fine write and one that evokes memories of my grandmother. Grandfather found her in the front yard, lying there passed on from a heart attack. S 1962, she was only 55 years old...I was 8 years old..
A. Sharma Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:10 AM
And back again with huge congrats my dear friend Carolyn //Upma//
Hoffman Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Congrats Carolyn on your win with this touching poem.
Callus Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Sad in one way, but beautiful and inspiring in another. Love the bond between mum and bush; reminds me of the loving faithful one who gives her life to save another. Congrats on a deserved win, Carolyn! // paul
Stephens Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Hi Carolyn, This poem about the tree's connection with your mother is so very moving. There is a spirituality, as I have often thought trees had, underlining your beautifully expressed poem. Regards Theresa xx
Gibson Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 12:17 PM
Carolyn, thank you for entering my contest with this wonderful true story of renewal. Congratulations on your placement. Faye
Mister Roboto Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 6:34 PM
HEAVY STUFF Carolyn. I read you for many selfish reasons. One is to experience the honesty of what you write. Most people won't touch stuff which you seem to put down well on paper. Inspiration is another reason. I do not enjoy seeing people in pain. But those who are brave enough to proactively deal with it through art need to be commended.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 1:34 AM
Very lovely sonnet Carolyn! His strange ways,, tough to understand dear! Gl in contest!
May Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 10:17 PM
Beautiful sonnet Carolyn..Yet there is sadness..a heartfelt write....hugs
Smith Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 8:55 PM
Wow Carolyn...What an amazing occurrence...Many mysterious thing happen when there is a strong bond and one is no longer there...beautiful sonnet ....hugs Tim
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