The Scent of Water

The Scent of Water


The air is dry, bone-dust dry,
carrying the odor of despair,
shimmering in its pseudo sky
dreams of what was never there.

Eyes, dry-crusted, cannot discern,
delusion seems the kinder fate
when all is lost in flameless burn
the scent of water come too late.

Tongues in mime-like motion seek
brief sustenance of drying dew
none are strong, none are weak,
none too many, none too few.

Waiting on that unfelt touch
amid the false – and true
nature’s subtle stroke of brush
the scent of water - overdue.


For Faye Gibson contest
“The Scent of Water”
7/6/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 7/29/2014 12:21:00 PM
John, A wonderful scent and win. <3 Congratulations, in Faye's "Out Of Water" contest... Always ~ Linda ~
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Date: 7/24/2014 1:44:00 AM
Awesome write,, merited great win,,huge congrats John!
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John Lawless
Date: 7/24/2014 7:14:00 AM
thank you Dr. for your support.
Date: 7/24/2014 12:20:00 AM
this one was so deserving of a high win! Congratulations, my friend.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/24/2014 7:14:00 AM
thank you Andrea
Date: 7/23/2014 8:28:00 PM
Congrats John on your win with this poem.Nicely done
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John Lawless
Date: 7/24/2014 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Greg for reading and commenting
Date: 7/23/2014 4:20:00 PM
Excellent poem John. Great build-up. Scent of water long overdue...but better late than never. Congrats on your deserved win! // paul
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:50:00 PM
Paul, I have spent some time with a group at the high school where I work called Water Awareness International. I have written a few poems and shared them at several of their fund raisers. Quite a dedicated group of students. Thanks for you comment.
Date: 7/23/2014 3:38:00 PM
Hi John, Congrats on your win. I felt quite parched on reading your excellent poem and I needed the scent of a drink of water afterwards. All the best Theresa. xx
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:08:00 PM
Thank You Theresa for you kind comment on my work
Date: 7/23/2014 12:20:00 PM
Nicely done John. Congratulations on your high marks in the contest... Verlena
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Date: 7/23/2014 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations, John, and thank you for entering my contest with this strong, emotional write.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/23/2014 4:07:00 PM
Faye, I appreciate the challenge of the contest and the stimulation of the muse to action.
Date: 7/14/2014 3:06:00 PM
water is all the more precious when one is in a hot and arid place This poem really makes that feeling felt.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/14/2014 7:56:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for you kind comment.
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