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The Scent of Autumn

Chilled winds Scattering leaves Cause a brown silent rain To fill the cool damp Autumn air In musk 10/21/15 contest...Autumn Stroll Cinquain Contest

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Date: 10/29/2015 9:08:00 PM

Frederic, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

Date: 10/28/2015 10:04:00 PM

Well done, Frederic! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Date: 10/27/2015 8:40:00 AM

Love the last line. Gave me an instant recollection of damp leaves and earth.

Date: 10/23/2015 8:08:00 PM

wow, the imagery is so nice. I like how you included smell in with sight and feeling, of the chilled wind!

Date: 10/23/2015 3:59:00 PM

The original thinking here made me smile.... Beautiful my friend..

Date: 10/22/2015 1:56:00 AM

filled with autumn's best flavor, frederick.. much delighted, wow!.. huggs

Date: 10/21/2015 11:46:00 PM

- Beautifully Cinquain, Frederic ! - Good luck in contetst - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 10/21/2015 11:39:00 PM

I can smell the autumn scents now with your amazing haiku, Frederic! Good luck in the contest :)

Date: 10/21/2015 10:28:00 PM

I love the smell of autumn, you describe it well. Very nice. BG