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The Scent of Autumn

Chilled winds
Scattering leaves
Cause a brown silent rain
To fill the cool damp Autumn air
In musk


10/21/15
contest...Autumn Stroll Cinquain Contest

Copyright © Frederic Parker | Year Posted 2015

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October 29, 2015 at 9:08 PM

Frederic, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT

October 28, 2015 at 10:04 PM

Well done, Frederic! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

October 27, 2015 at 8:40 AM

Love the last line. Gave me an instant recollection of damp leaves and earth.

Andrea Dietrich

October 23, 2015 at 8:08 PM

wow, the imagery is so nice. I like how you included smell in with sight and feeling, of the chilled wind!

October 23, 2015 at 3:59 PM

The original thinking here made me smile.... Beautiful my friend..

October 22, 2015 at 1:56 AM

filled with autumn's best flavor, frederick.. much delighted, wow!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 21, 2015 at 11:46 PM

- Beautifully Cinquain, Frederic ! - Good luck in contetst - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

October 21, 2015 at 11:39 PM

I can smell the autumn scents now with your amazing haiku, Frederic! Good luck in the contest :)

Barbara Gorelick

October 21, 2015 at 10:28 PM

I love the smell of autumn, you describe it well. Very nice. BG

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