The Scent

He had left but left his scent wafting in the room Needling loneliness In fathomless crimson cloud Remembering the pink touch _________________________________ June 27, 2016

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 9:31:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/2/2017 6:40:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by and liking, Funom ...

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/27/2017 8:08:00 AM

This brings the reader right there. Well done Probir :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 12:25:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/27/2017 5:34:00 AM

What a rapturous Tanka dearest, Probir! Superb!

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 6:19:00 AM

Thank you ...

Jan Allison

Date: 6/27/2017 4:32:00 AM

beautifully expressed Probir good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 6:20:00 AM

Thanks, Jan ...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2017 1:32:00 AM

vividly expressed, probir.. wonderful verse.. huggs

Probir Gupta
Date: 6/27/2017 6:27:00 AM

Thank you, nette ...