The Scent

He had left but left
his scent wafting in the room 
Needling loneliness
In fathomless crimson cloud
Remembering the pink touch
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June 27, 2016
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June 30, 2017 at 9:31 AM
This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.
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July 2, 2017 at 6:40 AM
Thank you for dropping by and liking, Funom ...
Sands Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 8:08 AM
This brings the reader right there. Well done Probir :)
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June 27, 2017 at 12:25 PM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Trifiatis Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 5:34 AM
What a rapturous Tanka dearest, Probir! Superb!
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June 27, 2017 at 6:19 AM
Thank you ...
Allison Avatar
June 27, 2017 at 4:32 AM
beautifully expressed Probir good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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June 27, 2017 at 6:20 AM
Thanks, Jan ...
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June 27, 2017 at 1:32 AM
vividly expressed, probir.. wonderful verse.. huggs
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June 27, 2017 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, nette ...
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