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The Scenic Route To Hell

I know I'm going to hell for eating this forbidden fruit but before I say my farewell let me leave taking the scenic route I want to see the ashy trees and the hell birds flying by the crimson lava filled seas with the stench of death's tide I got to death's black doors as a man of Haiti let me in the mighty Cerberus roared while I was burned for every sin And here I stand flaming hot in a place with no love my soul lay here to rot with a demon named Beelzebub

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/1/2013 1:49:00 PM
Wow ... an amazing write with magnificent imagery ... congrats on the well deserved win :)
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Date: 8/30/2013 3:50:00 PM
congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/27/2013 8:31:00 AM
glad to see so many people liked it. I try to keep out of the dark places a mind can lead but every now and again they can create something interesting
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Date: 8/26/2013 9:16:00 AM
An excellent write and win Ryan. Hugs
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Date: 8/25/2013 12:35:00 AM
Ryan, Congrats on winning the first place in my contest.
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Date: 8/24/2013 6:12:00 PM
Truly a deserving place, enjoyed it to its very best, good storyline and script, best of all is the ending! lols Congrats on yr win. Morgan
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Date: 8/24/2013 11:14:00 AM
An honor a long time coming. Congratulations. love, Joyce
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Date: 8/24/2013 9:03:00 AM
Hello Ryan, Congratulations!! In Dr. Ram's -Quatern - a sixteen line poem contest. enjoy your day. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/16/2011 5:48:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ryan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:57:00 AM
Very impressive and thoughtful expressions, Ryan
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