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by Robert James Liguori and Joseph Christopher Liguori

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The Scary Sky Battle

He is running towards me 
    in his plasma suit.
I have no time to hide from this devil, 
    from this brute.

So I run towards him 
    just as fast,
and I use my wings 
    to enhance my head-on dash.

Pow! A cascade
    of red and white dust!
He’s channeling deceit, 
    and I’m working with trust!

We take the battle to the sky 
    amongst thunder and lightning
One! Two! I punch away, 
    but his response is even more frightening…

His body is engulfed in flames, 
    while his eyes fire heat missiles
To the left, to the right, I duck and dodge, 
    and then my body and wings rise up like bristles.

He senses my hesitation throwing a fiery dart, 
    intended to impale.
It pierces my wing spinning me in a frenzy, 
    I have but one option...to grab his pointed tail.

I trust in good prevailing over evil, 
    even as I feel the blood trickling down my lowest feather,
Firmly in my grasp, 
    I feel destined that I will return him to the nether.

Everything is a blur, as we spin 
    tail over wings and horns over halo, 
Are we headed for 
    heaven or hell, I do not know.

Thursday, November 4, 2021
Sponsor: James Edward Lee Sr.
Contest Name: DO- IT (DUETS)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Wonderful allegorical tale of good and evil in battle with the ending left up to our imaginations! Congratulations on your win. Great, visceral images! Blessings as you fight the good fight!
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 12:44 PM
What a brilliant portrayal of a battling night sky. Incredible, Robert. congrats for your win.
Alex Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 6:49 AM
"my body and wings rise up like bristles" - Great description. Lively! Congratulations!
Kaianah Avatar
May 1, 2022 at 12:13 AM
Congratulations on your win Robert! Amazing poem. <3 ~Anna Kaianah
Scragg Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Wow! Impressive imagery and narrative. I can picture the battle.
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