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The Scarlet and Silver Tablecloth

line the ends the corners and posts both stood as a true endorsement for hard work and diligence one could speak to the wants of many through the selfishness of these people those who knew the value of the prize which these people treasured "the Contabier verses "the Colloquialism" together they stood tall someone spoke of these two entangled as "pleistocene *****Longi" the sleeping giant. Lines and ends centered middle between the post one should leave bragging in arrogance the other jolly, maybe friendly, and not as interesting as before. one might read them from Enthusiasm, Gaudy, beyond reproach double needed through a fixed contract. the Overall projection scheduled for the enjoyment of fans and people who wish to belong in the proper conversation.

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Date: 1/5/2024 6:06:00 PM
Nick, your poem is a mesmerizing use of words, weaving intricate patterns that delve into the complexities of human interaction and societal perceptions. The juxtaposition between the characters, the Contabier and the Colloquialism, is brilliantly depicted, reflecting the dichotomy of ambition and humility, pride and approachability. The depth of your narrative and the subtle commentary on social dynamics resonate profoundly, inviting contemplation long after the final line. Exceptionally crafted! - Daniel
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