The Scar

Do you think I do not love you anymore

my dear you were the first man I ever loved.

You hold a place in my heart no other man can touch

because you got there first.

Why did you have to fight with me , make
 
me choice basically my family or you.
 
The scar left behind from that day still brings

tears to my eyes as does the time when we tried again

And you gave up on me.

I leave you in tears for good because even though I love you

and always will because you never forget your first love.

I leave you in tears , you are not good for me my love 

you cause me pain and just added another scar when you left me 

The  second time we dated and I cried into my pillow suffering the pain of

flossing you a second time , just because you just gave up on us not want to try 

even though knowing I was there right at your side.

That is why my love I leave you for good in tears to never return to you
 
I shall never collect another scar caused by you , I walk away from what my 

heart wants  and leave you in tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/5/2014 12:53:00 AM
Very beautifully written Dear Kara, I like it, full of emotions , makes a scene infront you. I leave you in tears for good because even though I love you.. nice write up...
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Date: 9/5/2014 12:54:00 PM
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