The Scar

When first we met,
I marveled at your flawless flesh;
nary a wrinkle or blemish did offset.

Until cancer took your breast,
leaving a scar, obvious as a mountain range
upon your once flawless flesh.

The scar a reminder of what had been
and a symbol, not of an end, 
but a new beginning to life again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Winter Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 6:27 AM
OMG just cruising the soup and came across this incredibly beautiful poem. How lucky someone is to have you in their life. Positive, uplifting making my heart soar to know the incredible love and beauty that exist in some very special souls. Moved me so. love, shar
Culverhouse Avatar
February 10, 2010 at 4:09 AM
great idea and positive thoughts. you should sind this to the breast CA organization, I bet they would make this their theme poem. Great job.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 4:34 PM
A special poem indeed Mac.. my aunt died of breast cancer a few years ago.. bravo to the survivors and to your poem of intensity.. thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. "Sweetheart" of P.S.
Clark Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Beautiful tribute! God Bless!
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