The Same Gleaming Sky That David Saw

Awesome, magnificent, infinite and grand
these four beautiful words describe exactly the same
gleaming sky that David saw when composing a poem
to praise the Creator who used a command!


Millions of years have passed and the breath-taking beauty
of the wondrous stars and constellations never dawns;
feel David's emotions as he penned down inspiring psalms!
Don't we also lose ourselves in the sky's obscure immensity?


Find a spot where every corner of the twinkling sky is seen clearly;
look further into the boundless universe and grasp a sense of reality,
then analyse it and revoke the absurd thoughts that failed as doubt...
compare your faith to that of David who was happy to proclaim it!


See the nocturnal spectacle that always vows us in every aspect;
its so awesome when Mars appears with its rotating rings that
simply draw our attention to impose true belief...
so discard any false theory that all evolved by itself!
  

Written on 3/27/ 2014 by Andrew Crisci
for nette onclaud's contest,
" A Night Sky "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 2, 2014 at 5:45 PM
hi Andrew, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda
A  Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:21 AM
ANDREW:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
Onclaud Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 2:07 PM
from david to scientific theory.. you blended this so well ,andrew; impressive!.. a well-deserved win in my contest!.. best cheers with huggs!
Andresen Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 3:44 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A NIGHT SKY - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud, Andrew ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
April 1, 2014 at 1:05 AM
Enjoyed the write creating a nice picture and congrats on the win, andrew
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 8:37 PM
wonderful, comparing that sky to the one of many years ago! I am not sure, but maybe this needs to be 16 to 20 lines for the contest. Anyway, I hope you make the list!
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