The Salty Sea Rant(Looney Version)

Sailing ship to port
Tis evening or is it day
With time my brain has wilted fray
I steer the ore
I yell my salt
If I crash, tis not my fault
I repeat the fault I have in mind

Steering the ship to port
Under attack as well
Blue roosters under a spell
Squirting lemon juice
Tis simply not my day

Or so I tell my psychiatrist often.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 1:35 PM
funny, lemon juice is rough in the eye, funny,
Benkhen Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 7:53 PM
Criticism not withstanding, I don't intend this to be a Serious Poem.
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