The Salty Navigator

They are steered like rudders on ships
Their port lies between my two lips
My day is a drag
Lest my mouth snags a bag
Of Doritos Nacho Cheese Chips
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 10:02 PM
oh, now THIS was a good one to find because I adore nacho doritos. I was addicted to the ones made with Olestra, half the calories!! and was so pissed off when they took them off the market. They tasted nearly identical to "the real thing."
Burch Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Lol!! You're too funny Sir...nice add too lol. A clever write. Deb Thank you for your visit and wonderful thoughts of encouragement. You are quite intuitive ;)
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December 24, 2012 at 8:14 PM
Duke, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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December 6, 2012 at 9:40 PM
Another very witty poem. I love your limericks.
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