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The Salty Navigator

They are steered like rudders on ships Their port lies between my two lips My day is a drag Lest my mouth snags a bag Of Doritos Nacho Cheese Chips

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/20/2013 10:02:00 PM

oh, now THIS was a good one to find because I adore nacho doritos. I was addicted to the ones made with Olestra, half the calories!! and was so pissed off when they took them off the market. They tasted nearly identical to "the real thing."

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/8/2013 10:21:00 AM

Lol!! You're too funny Sir...nice add too lol. A clever write. Deb Thank you for your visit and wonderful thoughts of encouragement. You are quite intuitive ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2012 8:14:00 PM

Duke, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/6/2012 9:40:00 PM

Another very witty poem. I love your limericks.