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The Salt In the Air

Aquamarine seas
   Sweet salty winds invite me
      Have I found Heaven?

3rd place in Sweetheart's "Tropical Treasures" contest.

A. Green

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Jo Bien

July 31, 2010 at 6:23 AM

YES!! you have...it works for me! JB

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 12, 2010 at 11:08 AM

Congratulations Amy on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Tropical Treasures". Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 12, 2010 at 2:35 AM

You most probably have-- a slice of heaven right here on earth, Amy! Very nice haiku and I love your title! Congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 11, 2010 at 9:02 PM

Congrats on the 3rd place win, Amy.

Caryl Muzzey

July 11, 2010 at 4:27 PM

Wonderful Haiku, congrats on your win. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

July 11, 2010 at 12:54 PM

A lovely haiku, Amy. Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

July 11, 2010 at 11:58 AM

Thank you Amy, for your congrats and the same to you for this gem. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

July 11, 2010 at 9:53 AM

ooooh, how did i miss this very delightful one you did, Amy. Congratulations!! this one I love!

John Freeman

July 11, 2010 at 9:46 AM

Congratulations, Amy on your poem's place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 11, 2010 at 9:01 AM

Congrats Amy on your success in my Tropical Treasures contest with this wonderful descriptive Haiku depicting the vacation photos.. thankxx for supporting my contest.. with luv..