The Salt House

oh! my salt house,
i cannot assure 
that you are in the color of azzure!
just loitre around
and stole our heart 
to play with thee !
don't you feel sorry to kill us?
but i feel for the way we pollute
forgive us, and accept as friend
please not as fiend!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 21, 2016 at 6:46 PM
SRINIVETHAA RAJAKRISHNAN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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December 29, 2015 at 6:43 PM
SRINIVETHAA RAJAKRISHNAN, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT LOVE
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