The Salt House

oh! my salt house,
i cannot assure 
that you are in the color of azzure!
just loitre around
and stole our heart 
to play with thee !
don't you feel sorry to kill us?
but i feel for the way we pollute
forgive us, and accept as friend
please not as fiend!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 8, 2013 at 7:19 PM
Srinivethaa, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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November 5, 2013 at 10:27 PM
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT.TO TELL ABOUT ME I AM JUST A STUDENT OF CLASS 9 IN SJN INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL
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October 8, 2013 at 5:26 AM
great nivethaa by bagya mam
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October 7, 2013 at 6:35 AM
hello, Srinivethaa, ,intresting and deepI like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 7, 2013 at 4:39 AM
very nice personification poem
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October 7, 2013 at 4:07 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Srinivethaa ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 7, 2013 at 4:40 AM
THANKS ANNE
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October 7, 2013 at 4:01 AM
Well written and nicely expressed. Love your style and choice of words. Welcome to poetry soup,this a family you can call your own. Wishing you the best. Baron Of Ebullion
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