The Sailing Cloud and Me

O my feisty little cloud
From places afar you sail 
Along the leeway 
With gaiety so profound!

I treasure a hidden desire 
To share my thoughts with you 
Could you stop by for a moment 
Give me a minute or two

With all the silver linings 
You sail over mountains and seas
Did you chance upon a special someone 
Who could be tucking a note for me

I've seen the sweetest of messages 
On the soft petals of flowers 
And in the wobbling shiny dew drops
Over the lush green blades of grass

I've heard the blowing wind whisper 
To the the forests and hills around 
Soulful tunes of melody 
Where pleasures of my heart can be found 

O my pretty cloud do tell me
Tell me with all your glee
Could I be meeting that special someone , 
In the valley of eternity! 


STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (6),any form any theme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Date: 07/07/2020

place : Honorable Mention

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/6/2020 2:30:00 PM
Hello Mitali Saikia, it is so nice to meet you.When i see a cloud in the sky, I ask the same question: Could I be meeting my special someone in the valley of eternity? I am sure many others ask the same quesions. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2020 1:49:00 PM
Hello Mitali Saikia, welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2020 1:47:00 PM
Hello Miltali Saikia, you are so welcomed. Much love Darlene Enjoy your day my friend.
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Mitali Saikia
Date: 7/7/2020 1:04:00 AM
Hi Darlene.. ! So good to hear from you and thank you so much for your response! Much love!
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Mitali Saikia
Date: 7/7/2020 12:37:00 AM
Hi Darlene.. ! So good to hear from you and thank you so much for your response! Much love!
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