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The Sailing Cloud and Me

O my feisty little cloud From places afar you sail Along the leeway With gaiety so profound! I treasure a hidden desire To share my thoughts with you Could you stop by for a moment Give me a minute or two With all the silver linings You sail over mountains and seas Did you chance upon a special someone Who could be tucking a note for me I've seen the sweetest of messages On the soft petals of flowers And in the wobbling shiny dew drops Over the lush green blades of grass I've heard the blowing wind whisper To the the forests and hills around Soulful tunes of melody Where pleasures of my heart can be found O my pretty cloud do tell me Tell me with all your glee Could I be meeting that special someone , In the valley of eternity! STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (6),any form any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Date: 07/07/2020 place : Honorable Mention

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Date: 7/6/2020 2:30:00 PM
Hello Mitali Saikia, it is so nice to meet you.When i see a cloud in the sky, I ask the same question: Could I be meeting my special someone in the valley of eternity? I am sure many others ask the same quesions. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2020 1:49:00 PM
Hello Mitali Saikia, welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/7/2020 1:47:00 PM
Hello Miltali Saikia, you are so welcomed. Much love Darlene Enjoy your day my friend.
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Mitali Saikia
Date: 7/7/2020 1:04:00 AM
Hi Darlene.. ! So good to hear from you and thank you so much for your response! Much love!
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Mitali Saikia
Date: 7/7/2020 12:37:00 AM
Hi Darlene.. ! So good to hear from you and thank you so much for your response! Much love!

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