The Sadness of Grief's Death

The Sadness of Grief’s Death


tears,
wretchedness of an all consuming sadness,
emotional cannibalism devouring the host
draining the will to live, to breathe,
crushing the reality of memory’s dust.

grief,
crowded desolation of an empty room
hints, contours, shaping vacant chairs,
aromatic kisses wafting on the air
shrieks of melancholy’s mournfulness – unheard.

death,
stalker of the living’s life
greedy to take that which he never felt
denying those who come to know his need
for death is not the worst thing to happen -
to the grieving it is just the last.



7/26/2016
 

submitted to – Three Stanzas-Three Only – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Smith Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Wow! Great write John, "to the grieving...Just the last" congratulations...
Lawless Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Thanks Charlie, a difficult topic to write about.
Godwin Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Dynamic, John - a real 'thinker' ... CayCay
Lawless Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 9:02 PM
Thanks CayCay
Turner Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Very deep observation of a very sad situation John. You have expressed it very well.
Lawless Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Thank you Daniel
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2016 at 8:17 AM
- Deep and great written with words that describe the feelings very well, John - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, with age comes a greater understanding of these three conjoined demons.
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