The Sad Nocturnal Song of Frogs

The night is young
And enticing
Still, a lump weighs heavily on my heart
As I sit by the window
And reflect on the cause of life!

Pray, it would seem that, somehow
People get so engrossed in life
That they forget about its illusory power
Or,
Is it that they simply choose
To pretend to forget about it
And to concentrate on its joys!

Why, life bothers me
It moves me
It pains me
It is like a trap
A wonderful scene painted
Made of a most luscious clear watered pond
But, the moment you approach it
Creatures of darkness jump out
And pull you in,
In their cage where you become
Like laboratory rats spinning on wheels
Going faster and faster
Going nowhere
Yet, having to keep on moving
For such is what is expected!

Pray, the night is still young
Frogs croak tirelessly
Engaged in their own symphony
Leaves rattle by carelessly
Propelled by the winds
Rain drizzles over from the sky
And I can only think of that which life has taken from me
As well as that which I secretly desire
But which I may never get!

Pray, the lump weighing over my heart is growing
Almost as if it were a carnivorous plant
Existing there, in my inner garden
Ready to destroy everything that I treasure
From my memories
To my romantic aspirations!

Why, life is such
Made to be a mere game
Enacted by you and me
But being ruled by the powerful will of Fate
And Death!

Why, on this cold night
I can only sit and reflect
Saddened and burdened!

For Contest: 
Sad Free Verse 2017
Sponsored by Laura Loo
Written on 28 July 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 8/2/2017 12:06:00 PM
I can totally relate and feel the pain in this poem. Congrats on your win with this masterful piece. A fav for sure.
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Date: 8/1/2017 4:24:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and rhythm, Anoucheka. The pain is tangible in your poem. Congrats on your win.
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/2/2017 12:54:00 AM
Great Agnes thks for the appreciation :)
Date: 8/1/2017 3:57:00 PM
The sylvan imagery in your fifth stanza made this poem exceptional Anoucheka. Congratulations on your fine win! : )
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Date: 8/2/2017 12:54:00 AM
Thks Connie :)
Date: 8/1/2017 3:21:00 PM
Heartbreaking and nicely done, Anoucheka , congratulations you on your win ~*
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/2/2017 12:54:00 AM
Thks so much Eve :)
Date: 8/1/2017 1:00:00 PM
A sad poem written with excellence
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/2/2017 12:54:00 AM
Thks Kim :)
Date: 7/28/2017 12:30:00 PM
Great title Anoucheka and I enjoyed the vivid imagery in your deep sad poem... don't sit and ponder too long life is for living:-) hugs jan xx
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 7/28/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thks so much for the warm appreciation Jan :)
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Date: 7/28/2017 12:33:00 PM
Thks so much for the warm appreciation Jan :)
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