The Sad Fool

so fool to be that sad 
think of all the great things u've once had 
do not surrender like an obedient child 
fight the world ,forget about those who lied 
everything is fast moving so don't stop & say i cant go on 
there is no place between us for those who can't hold on 
be like the knights & fight inside the war 
knights who never regret what they've lived & died for
don't hide behind a wall & say i did my best 
think for your tomorrow & leave out all the rest 
just take your way forward & never look behind 
feel the clarity inside u ,feel you pure mind 
remove the curtains away from your eye
stand again & give your broken wings a try 
cause nothing yet deserve to make u say that early good bye ..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 7:19 AM
this is a great poem and it seems carefully written good one!
Segal Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Excellent poem!!! Another great read, thank you for your kind comment, take a look at my poem, A Clarity Of Vision, love Simone
Hilliker Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 6:49 PM
Keep on keeping on! Very well penned. Thanks for sharing.
W Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 8:09 AM
this is a very lovely poem good write.......always kate
Guzzi Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 5:56 AM
lovely thoughts just lovely. Light & Love and soup mail
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 5:13 AM
Noura Im in the chat if your around
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
September 23, 2009 at 4:12 AM
This is a great write powerful and true you have atrue gift one of the better poems ive read in awhile love the message in it keep writting
Loveless Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 10:48 AM
you could be really amazing. keep working at it <3 rain
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 4:50 AM
Sorry about the repeat on the comments. I thought that it did not go thru. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 4:49 AM
Like the next to last line. Good advice. Keep writing. Sara
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Interesting. Sara
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Good afternoon Noura. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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