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The Sacrifice

Spawn of Kraken's seed

	Angels weep for mortal man

		Token waits on shore

© May 01 2010 For Carolyn’s “Nature’s Revenge” contest

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May 7, 2010 at 12:11 PM

Carolyn and I both had your poem picked at the top of the list. Enjoy your well deserved honor. About your comment about your lack of originality--this poem attests to you creativity. Don't sell yourself short. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Barbara Gorelick

May 4, 2010 at 11:43 PM

Wonderful win.congrats...BG

Kim M

May 4, 2010 at 9:47 PM

Wonderful job! I thought this contest photo was rather difficult to interpret, but your poem seems to make it seem so easily described. Congratulations on the 1st Place award. This poem certainly deserves it.

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 4, 2010 at 7:53 PM

Congrats on the first win

John Freeman

May 4, 2010 at 6:09 PM

Congratulations Charles on an excellent take on the photo. Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

May 4, 2010 at 5:37 PM

Congratulations on this winning poem, Charles!! unique thinking here!! Well done!! ~ Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 4, 2010 at 5:29 PM

Congrats Charles on your 1st place win in this contest.. an awesome write for an awesome photo.. enjoy your awesome win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"