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The Sacrifice

Spawn of Kraken's seed Angels weep for mortal man Token waits on shore © May 01 2010 For Carolyn’s “Nature’s Revenge” contest

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Date: 5/7/2010 12:11:00 PM
Carolyn and I both had your poem picked at the top of the list. Enjoy your well deserved honor. About your comment about your lack of originality--this poem attests to you creativity. Don't sell yourself short. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/4/2010 11:43:00 PM
Wonderful win.congrats...BG
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Date: 5/4/2010 9:47:00 PM
Wonderful job! I thought this contest photo was rather difficult to interpret, but your poem seems to make it seem so easily described. Congratulations on the 1st Place award. This poem certainly deserves it.
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:53:00 PM
Congrats on the first win
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Date: 5/4/2010 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations Charles on an excellent take on the photo. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/4/2010 5:37:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning poem, Charles!! unique thinking here!! Well done!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/4/2010 5:29:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your 1st place win in this contest.. an awesome write for an awesome photo.. enjoy your awesome win.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/4/2010 4:49:00 PM
Big congrats go out to you for taking first place in the contest, Charles. Karen helped me judge and we both agreed yours was the best! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/2/2010 8:19:00 AM
Like this one a lot!
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Date: 5/1/2010 9:20:00 PM
Good one.
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