The Rythem of You

I slip between the sheets 
gently not wishing to wake you.

Carefully I snuggle up beside you
nuzzeling into your neck 
where it is tender and warm.

I breathe in the aroma  
of your freshly bathed body
and the essence of you.

My hand traces your graceful 
yet sinuous body.

As I lay my head on your chest
I hear the steadiness of your
breathing and the constant
beating of your heart as you sleep.

With all of my senses now full of you
I am lulled to sleep with the rythem of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/14/2012 9:23:00 AM
So sensuous and erotic with a touch of innocence Terry. You make touch a sensation reinvented. So special to read this! Luv, Lizabeth
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 1/13/2013 2:53:00 PM
Thank you for you kind praise. I hope your holiday season was the best and that you will have a wonderful new year. Huggs TLee
Date: 7/11/2012 7:14:00 PM
‡ I Love This Beautiful Photo, Sweet Beautiful Lady * Aside From The Image Presenting These Colours Of Splendours Love * It Also The Viewer To Embrace Its Loveliness & Take Its Beauty Upon A Stroll, Deep Inside * Also, I Loved Your Lovely Comment * 'Sugar & Spice' * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 7/24/2012 3:41:00 PM
Thanks friend glad my words were appreciated and welcome your kind words. Huggs TLee
Date: 6/13/2012 8:39:00 PM
OOOOOOOH yea I like this. So soothing <3
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 1/13/2013 3:03:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness to review and am pleased that you enjoyed my simple words. TLee
Date: 6/13/2012 1:19:00 PM
Hi Terry, I'm back again... to take another quick read... I also think the little poem you wrote as a comment to me is also splendid! If I had anything to do with the 'inspiration'... well that also makes me happy... ;-)) Terry
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/13/2012 7:28:00 PM
I just thought that what I wrote made a bigger story to what you wrote. I didn't even write it down to list as a poem. Yes you inspire me with some of your writings. I think more than likely that I could co-write easily with you as you are capeable of fueling my thoughts creatively. Huggs TLee
Date: 6/12/2012 2:15:00 PM
Oh my... it's cold and rainy outside... but reading this makes me rather warm... (if you get my drift... ;-)) Very good poem!! It communicates... Terry
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/12/2012 4:47:00 PM
To me this is how a relationship should be. I told you I had a tendenancy to rattle people. Thanks for your kind words. Huggs TLee
Date: 6/8/2012 9:11:00 AM
Very passionate write by you Terry.Love it!
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/8/2012 9:41:00 AM
Thanks Kash Huggs TLee
Date: 6/7/2012 1:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Terry. Hope you have a beautiful evening. Love, Carol
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/7/2012 5:35:00 PM
Hi Carol Thanks for stopping by and thanks for your kind words of review. Huggs TLee
Date: 6/7/2012 12:01:00 PM
A sweet poem Terry, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/7/2012 12:14:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise so glad you liked my poem. Thanks huggs TLee
Date: 6/7/2012 11:58:00 AM
smooth very nice
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Terry L. Allen
Date: 6/7/2012 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Richard and so nice of you to stop by and review. TLee
Date: 6/7/2012 9:50:00 AM
Terry, thump thump,,, --- --- --- --- your poem gives a lullaby the best heart beat... enjoyed...pd
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Date: 6/7/2012 11:56:00 AM
Thanks DP so glad you enjoyed my poem. Huggs TLee
Date: 6/7/2012 4:31:00 AM
very nice..David
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Date: 6/7/2012 8:59:00 AM
Hello friend thank you for stopping by to review and your kind words. Huggs TLee
Date: 6/7/2012 1:04:00 AM
Very beautiful feeling u get frm this poem.
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Date: 6/7/2012 12:15:00 PM
Thank you so much for kind words and kindness to review. TLee
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