The Rustling-Crunch of Autumn Leaves

fallen leaves peppers
barricading passages
in across the grounds
leaves spiral pin wheel fly round
children's delight performance

11/13/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Deschler Avatar
November 19, 2022 at 4:17 PM
This is just wonderful, Eve... Your poem was truly a joy to read this evening! Best wishes for the contest!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 14, 2022 at 1:26 AM
What a delight to image this poem in real terms. Hugs.
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 7:02 PM
A great performance for children from 8 to 80+! So enjoyable, Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 3:40 PM
love the fun pinwheel image
Ashley Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 2:54 PM
Dear Eve, your wonderful title and beautiful poem are a sensory and imaginative delight. Splendid poetry. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Kendrick Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 11:40 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Sands Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 11:11 AM
Great poem Eve. Igniting the senses. Well done :)
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