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The Rush Hour

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In city rush hour. on my rear driving mirror milkweed butterfly.
Written: July 28, 2021 A Brian Strand August Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/3/2021 8:12:00 AM
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You paint a vivid picture, Lasaad! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 8/2/2021 2:47:00 AM
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Great imagery. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/30/2021 12:28:00 PM
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This one is so reflective Lasaad, forgive the pun, yet your image brings sanity, to the insanity of rush hour traffic, really well thought out observation, cheers David
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/30/2021 12:43:00 PM
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Appreciate your delightful words David, and I'm glad you like this Haiku, my very best wishes to you.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 7/29/2021 11:34:00 AM
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What a sweet magical moment to take your mind off from the rush hour traffic!
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/29/2021 3:51:00 PM
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Thanks, Smita, I appreciate your kind words
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/29/2021 5:38:00 AM
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A beautiful moment well captured, Lasaad.
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/29/2021 3:51:00 PM
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Thanks, Vijay, appreciate your kind words
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 7/29/2021 3:20:00 AM
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Your poem reminds me I have seen no butterflies this year...Delice
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/29/2021 3:52:00 PM
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Thanks, Delice, appreciate your kind words
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/29/2021 2:15:00 AM
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It certainly takes your mind off the slow moving traffic Lasaad. Hope you're well and enjoying your week. Tom
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/29/2021 3:53:00 PM
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Thanks, Tom, appreciate your kind words, Blessings and best wishes
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/28/2021 10:58:00 PM
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Perfect haiku, A flash of nature in otherwise mundane circumstances.
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/29/2021 3:54:00 PM
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Thanks, Victor, appreciate your kind words. Blessings and regards
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/28/2021 8:23:00 PM
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Thank you for sharing a lovely, precious moment (whether real or imaginary). It was delightful to read, Lasaad. :) Evelyn
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/29/2021 3:55:00 PM
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Thanks, Evelyn, appreciate your kind words
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Alexis Y.
Date: 7/28/2021 6:28:00 PM
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Hi Lasaad, You've penned the scene very well in your well-written Haiku. Nice photo as well. Good job. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/28/2021 6:34:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Alexis; I'm glad you like it and appreciate your sweet words. my very best wishes to you

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