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The Rush Hour

In city rush hour. 
on my rear driving mirror
milkweed butterfly.



Written: July 28, 2021



A Brian Strand August Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand

Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2021

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August 3, 2021 at 8:12 AM

You paint a vivid picture, Lasaad! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex

August 2, 2021 at 2:47 AM

Great imagery. Beautiful Creation. Congratulations on your win!

July 30, 2021 at 12:28 PM

This one is so reflective Lasaad, forgive the pun, yet your image brings sanity, to the insanity of rush hour traffic, really well thought out observation, cheers David

July 30, 2021 at 12:43 PM

Appreciate your delightful words David, and I'm glad you like this Haiku, my very best wishes to you.

July 29, 2021 at 11:34 AM

What a sweet magical moment to take your mind off from the rush hour traffic!

July 29, 2021 at 3:51 PM

Thanks, Smita, I appreciate your kind words

July 29, 2021 at 5:38 AM

A beautiful moment well captured, Lasaad.

July 29, 2021 at 3:51 PM

Thanks, Vijay, appreciate your kind words

Delice Arleen Skelly

July 29, 2021 at 3:20 AM

Your poem reminds me I have seen no butterflies this year...Delice

July 29, 2021 at 3:52 PM

Thanks, Delice, appreciate your kind words

July 29, 2021 at 2:15 AM

It certainly takes your mind off the slow moving traffic Lasaad. Hope you're well and enjoying your week. Tom

July 29, 2021 at 3:53 PM

Thanks, Tom, appreciate your kind words, Blessings and best wishes

Victor Buhagiar

July 28, 2021 at 10:58 PM

Perfect haiku, A flash of nature in otherwise mundane circumstances.

July 29, 2021 at 3:54 PM

Thanks, Victor, appreciate your kind words. Blessings and regards

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 28, 2021 at 8:23 PM

Thank you for sharing a lovely, precious moment (whether real or imaginary). It was delightful to read, Lasaad. :) Evelyn

July 29, 2021 at 3:55 PM

Thanks, Evelyn, appreciate your kind words

July 28, 2021 at 6:28 PM

Hi Lasaad, You've penned the scene very well in your well-written Haiku. Nice photo as well. Good job. Have a great day:-) Alexis

July 28, 2021 at 6:34 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis; I'm glad you like it and appreciate your sweet words. my very best wishes to you

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