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The Rush

in the woodland’s hush naked where the waters gush. . . the rush of fresh love

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Glen Schwartz

Date: 5/27/2017 6:53:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Very nice thoughts..

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/27/2017 9:12:00 AM

Congrats on your top win with this appealing haiku, Andrea! Janice

Norman Crocker

Date: 7/18/2015 8:01:00 PM

I like your imagry.

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:44:00 AM

what a rush

David Meade

Date: 10/27/2014 8:29:00 PM

Just found this Haiku -- AWESOME, love the "-ush" sound, the woods (reminds me of a Bob Seger song . . ."trusty woods"), spring, love, water . . . very sweet, passionate, outside . . . all working together for outstanding effect. My favorite so far!! 7+

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/20/2014 7:00:00 AM

Tasting like Mama's home made dish. Shabash!(well done in Tamil a Language)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/19/2014 12:20:00 AM

That's it. As a haiku lover I can say this piece is perfect. Much much love]:: rajat

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/7/2014 11:49:00 AM

Just me saying a very quick hi to you sweetie! How cool that you pulled off rhyming in this haiku, with a double entendre, even? This definitely comes across as a sensual and refreshing read for me... hugs to you-- gotta go and sleep!!

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/28/2014 8:28:00 PM

Like this!!!! Congratulations.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/28/2014 7:48:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea. Another great.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/28/2014 12:08:00 AM

And back again wid huge congrats Andrea on ur awesome win! This one had written winner all over!

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/27/2014 7:27:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea! Nicely written. Sandra

David Mohn

Date: 9/27/2014 7:06:00 PM

Marvelous Andrea…big congrats to you...so well written :)

Edward Ebbs

Date: 9/27/2014 5:36:00 PM

Congrats Kiddo :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/27/2014 5:19:00 PM

ah this is mint rhyming within a haiku, andrea! it's very sensual and romantic (I received a lot of sensual entries, they know what I like! haha) congrats on your win in my contest :)

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2014 5:16:00 PM

I loved this one the first time I read it, I faved it then. Congratulations on another win. We should crack open a couple of bottles of Champagne and celebrate. Well you know you with your husband and family, and me with, I mean me with...ahhh...oh yeah me with me...woohoo!!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2014 4:58:00 PM

simply stunning Andrea many congrats on your win - into faves for me:-) hugs jan xxx

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 9/27/2014 8:32:00 AM

Nicely done Andrea...nature and romance all in one...loved it! :) Ana

Monterey Sirak

Date: 9/26/2014 8:13:00 AM

Fantastic, beautiful and so romantic. A winner for sure.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 9/25/2014 6:28:00 AM

Wonderful. Beautiful. You've captured a love worth every breath.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/23/2014 4:50:00 PM

Lordy me Andrea...You rhymed the first two lines and the second word in the last just like she asked! This beauty has got me sweating a little and I think I'm hyper-ventilating too...

Daver Austin

Date: 9/23/2014 7:39:00 AM

A blanket spreader for sure, but later with the beer and sandwiches. Your refreshing write is so stimulating, it's time for romance. Love, daver

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/22/2014 7:19:00 PM

YOUR @&$?en AMAZING. This is going to my favs.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/22/2014 1:50:00 PM

we both spoke of love but this one is so refreshing, andie... and you made the ku rhyme; incredible!.. huggs

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/22/2014 4:36:00 AM

Wow Andrea its so beautiful ! Sure to fly high! Good luck dear!