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The Rush

in the woodland’s hush naked where the waters gush. . . the rush of fresh love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/27/2017 6:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Very nice thoughts..
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Date: 5/27/2017 9:12:00 AM
Congrats on your top win with this appealing haiku, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 7/18/2015 8:01:00 PM
I like your imagry.
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Date: 5/16/2015 11:44:00 AM
what a rush
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Date: 10/27/2014 8:29:00 PM
Just found this Haiku -- AWESOME, love the "-ush" sound, the woods (reminds me of a Bob Seger song . . ."trusty woods"), spring, love, water . . . very sweet, passionate, outside . . . all working together for outstanding effect. My favorite so far!! 7+
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Date: 10/20/2014 7:00:00 AM
Tasting like Mama's home made dish. Shabash!(well done in Tamil a Language)
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Date: 10/19/2014 12:20:00 AM
That's it. As a haiku lover I can say this piece is perfect. Much much love]:: rajat
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Date: 10/7/2014 11:49:00 AM
Just me saying a very quick hi to you sweetie! How cool that you pulled off rhyming in this haiku, with a double entendre, even? This definitely comes across as a sensual and refreshing read for me... hugs to you-- gotta go and sleep!!
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Date: 9/28/2014 8:28:00 PM
Like this!!!! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/28/2014 7:48:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Another great.
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Date: 9/28/2014 12:08:00 AM
And back again wid huge congrats Andrea on ur awesome win! This one had written winner all over!
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea! Nicely written. Sandra
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:06:00 PM
Marvelous Andrea…big congrats to you...so well written :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:36:00 PM
Congrats Kiddo :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:19:00 PM
ah this is mint rhyming within a haiku, andrea! it's very sensual and romantic (I received a lot of sensual entries, they know what I like! haha) congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:16:00 PM
I loved this one the first time I read it, I faved it then. Congratulations on another win. We should crack open a couple of bottles of Champagne and celebrate. Well you know you with your husband and family, and me with, I mean me with...ahhh...oh yeah me with me...woohoo!!!!
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Date: 9/27/2014 4:58:00 PM
simply stunning Andrea many congrats on your win - into faves for me:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:32:00 AM
Nicely done Andrea...nature and romance all in one...loved it! :) Ana
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Date: 9/26/2014 8:13:00 AM
Fantastic, beautiful and so romantic. A winner for sure.
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Date: 9/25/2014 6:28:00 AM
Wonderful. Beautiful. You've captured a love worth every breath.
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Date: 9/23/2014 4:50:00 PM
Lordy me Andrea...You rhymed the first two lines and the second word in the last just like she asked! This beauty has got me sweating a little and I think I'm hyper-ventilating too...
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Date: 9/23/2014 7:39:00 AM
A blanket spreader for sure, but later with the beer and sandwiches. Your refreshing write is so stimulating, it's time for romance. Love, daver
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Date: 9/23/2014 1:30:00 AM
I've a crush on this one of yours Dutch greetings Elly
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Date: 9/22/2014 7:19:00 PM
YOUR @&$?en AMAZING. This is going to my favs.
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Date: 9/22/2014 1:50:00 PM
we both spoke of love but this one is so refreshing, andie... and you made the ku rhyme; incredible!.. huggs
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