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The Rush

in the woodland’s hush

naked where the waters gush. . .

the rush of fresh love

first lovehaiku

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Glen Schwartz

May 27, 2017 at 6:53 PM

Congrats on your win, Very nice thoughts..

Janice Canerdy

May 27, 2017 at 9:12 AM

Congrats on your top win with this appealing haiku, Andrea! Janice

Norman Crocker

July 18, 2015 at 8:01 PM

I like your imagry.

Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 11:44 AM

what a rush

David Meade

October 27, 2014 at 8:29 PM

Just found this Haiku -- AWESOME, love the "-ush" sound, the woods (reminds me of a Bob Seger song . . ."trusty woods"), spring, love, water . . . very sweet, passionate, outside . . . all working together for outstanding effect. My favorite so far!! 7+

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

October 20, 2014 at 7:00 AM

Tasting like Mama's home made dish. Shabash!(well done in Tamil a Language)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 19, 2014 at 12:20 AM

That's it. As a haiku lover I can say this piece is perfect. Much much love]:: rajat

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 7, 2014 at 11:49 AM

Just me saying a very quick hi to you sweetie! How cool that you pulled off rhyming in this haiku, with a double entendre, even? This definitely comes across as a sensual and refreshing read for me... hugs to you-- gotta go and sleep!!

Faye Gibson

September 28, 2014 at 8:28 PM

Like this!!!! Congratulations.

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 28, 2014 at 7:48 PM

Congratulations Andrea. Another great.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 28, 2014 at 12:08 AM

And back again wid huge congrats Andrea on ur awesome win! This one had written winner all over!

Sandra Haight

September 27, 2014 at 7:27 PM

Congratulations, Andrea! Nicely written. Sandra

David Mohn

September 27, 2014 at 7:06 PM

Marvelous Andrea…big congrats to you...so well written :)

Edward Ebbs

September 27, 2014 at 5:36 PM

Congrats Kiddo :)

Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

September 27, 2014 at 5:19 PM

ah this is mint rhyming within a haiku, andrea! it's very sensual and romantic (I received a lot of sensual entries, they know what I like! haha) congrats on your win in my contest :)

Maurice Yvonne

September 27, 2014 at 5:16 PM

I loved this one the first time I read it, I faved it then. Congratulations on another win. We should crack open a couple of bottles of Champagne and celebrate. Well you know you with your husband and family, and me with, I mean me with...ahhh...oh yeah me with me...woohoo!!!!

Jan Allison

September 27, 2014 at 4:58 PM

simply stunning Andrea many congrats on your win - into faves for me:-) hugs jan xxx

Ana Espinola Collins

September 27, 2014 at 8:32 AM

Nicely done Andrea...nature and romance all in one...loved it! :) Ana

Monterey Sirak

September 26, 2014 at 8:13 AM

Fantastic, beautiful and so romantic. A winner for sure.

Scott Thirtyseven

September 25, 2014 at 6:28 AM

Wonderful. Beautiful. You've captured a love worth every breath.

Tim Ryerson

September 23, 2014 at 4:50 PM

Lordy me Andrea...You rhymed the first two lines and the second word in the last just like she asked! This beauty has got me sweating a little and I think I'm hyper-ventilating too...