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The Running Man

Leg over leg I watch Oh once great majestic man Stuffed with life and vigor Stood atop the world Champion Once conqueror of mountains Now crushed by pleasure Turned animal of desire Now the running re-claimer Of past honors Leg over leg I watch One step at a time His lungs smashing against his insides, As they fight for air, Against a nicotine choke hold Leg over leg I watch His feet They burn, Sprinting through a Savannah of flames The weight of his past gluttony slows him down And chains of sweets Bind him to a mountain of food; An animal Hungry for progress Leg over leg I watch A hurricane of alcoholic despair swells above him As a downpour of liquor whips his beast of a body And all that he has drank Tries to wash him away Leg over leg I watch His vision blurs, The distant mountains and clouds begin to swirl, The road ahead bends and buckles, His legs vanish beneath him And he greets the floor with open arms I watch His heart rages Trapped in a cage The animal pushes and pulls aggressively Painfully biting against his chest Until it finally becomes quiet Still Strangled by the smoke, grease and alcohol Silencing all who witnessed their reign of terror His body unmoving Just inches from the finish line Still I watch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/3/2013 11:34:00 AM
Chad,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/3/2013 10:30:00 AM
Hi Chad, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/3/2013 3:50:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Chad ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/3/2013 1:19:00 AM
Wow nice poem. You write like a pro. I could imagine the whole event while the runner was running. I hope he finished 1st
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