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The Running Chestnut- Onomatopoetic

what a running chestnut sounds like                                                                                                                                    when Parting ways with a damsel like the wind whoosh     								   	Naturally the gallant knight of the noble Anguish Languish 									Galloping in clip clop steed whinnying 											standing alone ready to take the blame audaciously 											in the crinkling face of smoke filled nose the dragon 									Roars vibrating the ears rearing an ugly wheezing head                                                                                                      		The hooting laughter hahaha hihihihi of passersby										 burping out who done its in midst of gaseous hissing fog 									 blushing little lady long gone into silent retreat 										 Ripping out loudly It was not the ribit ribit of a croaking frog 								 with swooshing sword raised waving back and forth                                                                                                          		clearing the air taking brunt of insults you pig oink oink eschewed                                                                                                         		The clanging armor holds the dragon slain the stench quenched

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/3/2012 9:40:00 PM
John, this is just too funny!!! LOL...and he was still 'chivalrous'...he took the blame for a fart he didn't comment ;) ...I am reading your works tonite, in part (no pun intended), and am enjoying them tremendously...I will be back to read more...Big Huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/2/2012 3:40:00 PM
CONFLATULATIONS to you this poem based on Romanian Pârt Cross-linguistic onomatopoeia
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Date: 3/30/2012 3:52:00 PM
Wow! You took onomatopia to a whole new level! Really enjoyed reading of how the knight slew the dragon. Fantastic! Love, Carolyn
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John Beam
Date: 3/30/2012 5:18:00 PM
Thanks and hope the people get the double allegory really nothing chivalrous about it at all based on the Romanian pâr? Cross-linguistic onomatopoeia
Date: 3/28/2012 12:06:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon John B. I am reading today and hoping to find some inspiration to write. I had a run a week or so ago and now it wimped out on me. Thank you for posting your poetry and sharing it with others. Love, Carol
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John Beam
Date: 3/28/2012 12:20:00 PM
thanks Carol and I hope you find that which inspires. The words of my 7th grade Lit. teacher when you cant find the words a good writer doesn't think he writes. I hope you have a Good day Carol.

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