The Round Garden

The cerulean river
veers its imperfect bights
through unbending 
rigidity of fixed earth.
My life's goal
as a square flower
of florid constancy
is still to thrive
in porcelain conformity
of a round garden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Enjoyable! My mind follows the flow of your garden!
Cozart Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Krampe Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Gorgeous image, Dale, and I like the paradoxical nature of the square thing being the flower.
Cozart Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 4:47 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Allison Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 4:24 PM
you certainly are thriving with your exceptional free verse Dale, another little gem my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 4:30 PM
Thanks so much, Jan.
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