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The Rotten Day

Today was a rotten
And terrible day
No sun in the sky
And the birds flew away
Raindrops drip dropping
Made mud from the dirt
My shoes got all wet
And so did my shirt
The lunch lady was mean
The bus driver was late
Fish sticks and peas
On my dinner plate
Today was a day
I would not call splendid
I’m going to bed
So happy it ended.
Good night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/25/2017 12:03:00 PM
Kitty, I hope today is a better day. John
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Kitty Lou
Date: 11/25/2017 3:46:00 PM
LOL, thanks, just a poem!
Date: 11/25/2017 6:47:00 AM
If one thing went right was the way you expressed your poem that night...Very clear even in despair... All the best today Kitty Lou
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Kitty Lou
Date: 11/25/2017 7:33:00 AM
thank you!

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