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The Rotten Day

Today was a rotten And terrible day No sun in the sky And the birds flew away Raindrops drip dropping Made mud from the dirt My shoes got all wet And so did my shirt The lunch lady was mean The bus driver was late Fish sticks and peas On my dinner plate Today was a day I would not call splendid I’m going to bed So happy it ended. Good night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 11/25/2017 12:03:00 PM
Kitty, I hope today is a better day. John
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Kitty Lou
Date: 11/25/2017 3:46:00 PM
LOL, thanks, just a poem!
Date: 11/25/2017 6:47:00 AM
If one thing went right was the way you expressed your poem that night...Very clear even in despair... All the best today Kitty Lou
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Kitty Lou
Date: 11/25/2017 7:33:00 AM
thank you!