The Roses In the Crumble

I had run out of all the chocolate
Felt bore and wanted a pomegranate
Looked for in the fridge but didn't get
Further darkened the gray climate

Went out just for a little fresh air
Met the swinging braid of hair
A lot of stories woven there
The merrily moving black mare

I met her after a long time
A creeper in the swift climb
Ding-a-ling sounds of the wind chime
Though a little past her prime

Love sees neither season nor clime
In new blossoms shines the time
Sweeter tastes the mulled wine
The passion makes the blue sunshine

The tapped doors first hesitate
Once overcome opens the floodgate
Tall arose the purple spate
Time held in a churning wait

Both needed to unbridle
The pent up cascades a little
A lot of roses in the crumble
The moon arose from the parting cuddle
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February 22, 2018

Love Poem-Rhyme Only - Poetry Contest
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Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 6:24 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Probir.
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February 24, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Well done, Probir, on a fine write. Regards, viv
Ashley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 10:48 AM
Oh such an exquisite and expressive poem Probir. Beauty throughout and so poetic especially your last stanza. Enchanting poetry.. Congratulations on your lovely win!
Ashley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 12:01 PM
In my heart, your poem's in first place, Probir..
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 11:09 AM
Yes, Susan ... I myself laugh at my self-written adjective 'wonderful third' below ... My greater prize lies in the fact that still you say it exquisite and enchanting ... Thank you so much ...
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:37 AM
beautifully expressed sweet Probir, lovely poem, thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Gupta Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Thank you, Laura for your congrats for the wonderful third placement ... so nice of you ...
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 12:52 AM
Beautiful write, Probir, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
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February 22, 2018 at 4:48 PM
What a sweet entry for the contest Probir! Best of luck my friend! : )
Gupta Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Thank you, Connie ...
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 3:33 PM
This a very charming poem, Probir with sweet flow. Good luck in the contest.
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February 23, 2018 at 6:53 AM
Thank you, Andrea ...
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February 22, 2018 at 12:09 PM
- A sweet and lovely love poem, Probir - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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February 23, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
Sands Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Very nice Probir. I love how you ended it :)
Gupta Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Gentile Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 8:08 AM
I really enjoyed your interesting and expressive poem, Probir Good Luck in the contest !!
Gupta Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Thank you, Mike ...
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February 22, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Enjoyed reading your descriptive and expressive work. A touch of romance was in the air. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
Gupta Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Thank you, Sara ...
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 6:45 AM
A number of lovely lines in your poem Probir..moon arose from the parting cuddle,...tapped doors first hesitate...very poetic. Best for a win.
Gupta Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
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