The Rose's Illusion

In a dark forest I spied two lovers,
Melding into the heat of their love,
Their Motions slowly sliding towards the axis 
Motions which became more like an art,
An art which the forest kept on covering in shades of black,
And shades of black which now turned into a crimson pink in the moment of unison,
To unravel a sleeping rose, which sweetly opened its self to me in the darkness of a jealous 
forest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dorelien Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:52 PM
Thank You
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:18 PM
this is really cool. Loved this one. Bye now, Andrea
Brown Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 10:17 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Guy-Adler. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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