The Rosemary Affair

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Garden Rosemary, thyme He said that I smelled like Rosemary, how would he know that? Cheater

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/2/2015 10:39:00 AM

Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.

Josefina Costales

Date: 6/27/2015 8:28:00 PM

I like how this cinquain evokes deeper images in so few phrases. WTG Sara

Milton Robertson

Date: 6/25/2015 7:26:00 AM

Yes, the flowers are sweet, but how would he know that? The Cheater... Hmmm. Good One Sara.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/24/2015 7:34:00 AM

- Beautiful fragrance from your garden, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2015 3:51:00 PM

You are on a roll with cinquains, Sara. I rather like this one!!

Constance La France

Date: 6/23/2015 1:43:00 PM

Sara , I love the smell of rosemary and thyme and many other herbs, I have a planter full of a variety and thanks for visiting my poem, beneath