The Rose of the Friendship

They are the boats in the river
Hills of the sun and the green leaves
Evening or mornings regardless

Roaring clouds I am afraid of
Oysters of friendship I seek much
Shouting trees I am nervous of
Embankment of the lake I need

Open arms of the jasmine tree
Fill the holes of monotony

Time acquires a pink dimension
Horizons of the moist rainbow
Endless pearls from the confluence

Fountain pens of the scarlet look
Rejoice within the long fingers
In the crisis of the black gloom
Evenings start gathering the stars
Nights slow down the dark descending
Doors greet the soft moon light touches
Sapphires seek to send the address
Hemming the time the blue needle
Instilling the drops of shadows
Pens pick up the friendship pictures
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May 2, 2018
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Horsman Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 3:13 PM
Wonderful weaver of words, excellent poetry..
Gupta Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thank you, Harry ...
Sands Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:38 PM
This is absolutely beautiful Probir! Well written. I love it :)
Gupta Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:04 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi ...
Callus Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 1:43 PM
What captivating imagery, Probir! A fitting title and a delightful acrostic. Regards // paul
Gupta Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:05 AM
Thank you, Paul ... Glad you like it ... Regards ... probir ...
Roper Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Great Acrostic, Probir, amazing imagery. I wanted to thank you on your comment of writing a Haiku,, I took your advice. I reached for the artist inside me..Good luck in Emile's contest. Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:11 AM
Not my advice ... Just suggestion ... Haiku is in fact an artistry usually a message in the third line ... the artist in you is surely capable of wording nice haikus ... Thank you for reading the acrostic ...
Williams Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:44 AM
A great acrostic with a great title Probir. I loved your description and the embroidery of words into your theme. A rose has the highest vibrational frequency and is my favorite flower. All the best in the contest...Maria:)
Gupta Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Thank you so much, Maria ... I do value your comments ... Glad you liked ...
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Hello Probir, you are so right pens do pick up the friendship pictures. Also pen and paper to write one another. Have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Your welcome my friend.
Gupta Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 9:32 AM
Thank you, Darlene ...
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