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The Rose of the Friendship

They are the boats in the river Hills of the sun and the green leaves Evening or mornings regardless Roaring clouds I am afraid of Oysters of friendship I seek much Shouting trees I am nervous of Embankment of the lake I need Open arms of the jasmine tree Fill the holes of monotony Time acquires a pink dimension Horizons of the moist rainbow Endless pearls from the confluence Fountain pens of the scarlet look Rejoice within the long fingers In the crisis of the black gloom Evenings start gathering the stars Nights slow down the dark descending Doors greet the soft moon light touches Sapphires seek to send the address Hemming the time the blue needle Instilling the drops of shadows Pens pick up the friendship pictures ________________________________ May 2, 2018 NEW POEMS ONLY - 2 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Date: 5/7/2018 3:13:00 PM
Wonderful weaver of words, excellent poetry..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/8/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Harry ...
Date: 5/3/2018 2:38:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful Probir! Well written. I love it :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/4/2018 12:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Heidi ...
Date: 5/3/2018 1:43:00 PM
What captivating imagery, Probir! A fitting title and a delightful acrostic. Regards // paul
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/4/2018 12:05:00 AM
Thank you, Paul ... Glad you like it ... Regards ... probir ...
Date: 5/3/2018 11:59:00 AM
Great Acrostic, Probir, amazing imagery. I wanted to thank you on your comment of writing a Haiku,, I took your advice. I reached for the artist inside me..Good luck in Emile's contest. Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/4/2018 12:11:00 AM
Not my advice ... Just suggestion ... Haiku is in fact an artistry usually a message in the third line ... the artist in you is surely capable of wording nice haikus ... Thank you for reading the acrostic ...
Date: 5/2/2018 8:44:00 AM
A great acrostic with a great title Probir. I loved your description and the embroidery of words into your theme. A rose has the highest vibrational frequency and is my favorite flower. All the best in the contest...Maria:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/3/2018 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maria ... I do value your comments ... Glad you liked ...
Date: 5/2/2018 8:43:00 AM
Hello Probir, you are so right pens do pick up the friendship pictures. Also pen and paper to write one another. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/4/2018 1:51:00 PM
Your welcome my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 5/3/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene ...

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