The Rose In the Desert

THE ROSE IN THE DESERT

Days dragging with patches of memories of unhappy infancy
You fell on me as rain in hot summer
A traveler in desert sans company has no dreams of paradise
But collage of thoughts of imminent tragedy

Horrible flashes of father kicking mother
Tears she shed measured ocean of torture
Found no the other side of the ocean
She swam with lean tender hands with children intimidated

Home without love is hell;
Father is the devil; torturer of wife and children
Little hearts grow brooding over vengeance
Agony and persecution nourish malevolence defeating benevolence

Castaway perplexed in the desert of despondency
I saw you; the rose in desert; fountain of relief and love
Words flowed as drops of grape wine
My soul flew to a new horizon where doves hover with gentle wings

In the deepest chamber of my heart I preserved
Watered with my tears not to fade
Brighter than the brightest in the whole world
The solace and zest in the lonely battlefield

My ecstasy and partner in celebration
My love and breath; pulse of my life
The autumn of the crusader
The peace in my sleep and sweetness in my dream

You adorn the desert; wonder in the barren
A diamond glittering in the darkness
An expectation to the forsaken
Lighthouse to the ship in the storm

                                                                                        ASOKUMAR.K.A
                                                                                                 12/12/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 11:10 PM
CONGRATS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~
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August 18, 2013 at 1:57 AM
Thank you for the message SKAT ... with love ASOKUMAR
A   Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 10:20 PM
Hello Asokumar, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *
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August 18, 2013 at 1:59 AM
Thank you for the message Linda, with love ASOKUMAR
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August 13, 2013 at 3:59 PM
Congrats on your featured poem! Laura :) Strong imagery
Panangad Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 12:39 PM
Hai Laura, thank you for reading my poem and making valuable commenting, I've read some of your poems you are a true poet dear, keep in touch
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August 11, 2013 at 7:07 AM
Man, what an entrance! Great way to debut on the Soup, nice poem and welcome!!! MC
Panangad Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 11:31 AM
Thank you MC, keep in touch, I'll go on posting my own and reading poetry of Soup realm. hear you!?
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August 5, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Hello new member: Asokumar ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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August 8, 2013 at 2:20 AM
Anne Lise Anderson , I have come across some of your poems , good, keep on posting
Panangad Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 2:15 AM
thank you Anne Lise Anderson for your comment keep in touch, I will share more
A  Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 5:42 PM
A deep thought,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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August 8, 2013 at 2:18 AM
Skat Oz thank you for your observation and comment I have read some of your poems and found rarely worded , be in the flow, ASOKUMAR
A   Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 3:40 PM
A P., wow, the imagery sparks with light... love it-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@... ...
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August 8, 2013 at 2:27 AM
Poet Destroyer, rare name you have chosen, but 'Hands' is a different creation, thank you for the comment you made on my poem, keep in touch
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