The Rose and the Thorn

The Rose and the Thorn

The red little bloom on the side of the walk
Caught my eye at the start of dawn
The cherry little sight was too hard to balk
The sweet little whiff made me to carry on the long

Blink of an eye with the lost thoughts 
The best was to loot even with the warn 
Looked either side to grapple on the stalk
The torn in the way with a tingle on the grope

Thorn turned red from the hash of the wound 
Rouse from the sleep from the sudden dwam
Grief stuck hard hurting through the soul
The gloomy little journey came crashing down the long

The sweet little glimpse was so hard to loose
Mutter on the way of her charming smook
The simper in the air with the lovely booze
Strode down the path with the clenched bloom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 9:24 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 22, 2016 at 7:48 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK THIS YEAR 2016
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 4:37 AM
- Hey Senura :) - Welcome with your first great poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 9:45 PM
Hi Senura, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
A   Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Senura, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Beam Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 6:15 AM
Nice read. I liked your choice of words
Fernando Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 6:17 AM
Thank you John Beam! :)
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