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The Rose and the Thorn

The Rose and the Thorn The red little bloom on the side of the walk Caught my eye at the start of dawn The cherry little sight was too hard to balk The sweet little whiff made me to carry on the long Blink of an eye with the lost thoughts The best was to loot even with the warn Looked either side to grapple on the stalk The torn in the way with a tingle on the grope Thorn turned red from the hash of the wound Rouse from the sleep from the sudden dwam Grief stuck hard hurting through the soul The gloomy little journey came crashing down the long The sweet little glimpse was so hard to loose Mutter on the way of her charming smook The simper in the air with the lovely booze Strode down the path with the clenched bloom

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Date: 1/22/2016 7:48:00 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU BACK THIS YEAR 2016
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Date: 9/29/2015 4:37:00 AM
- Hey Senura :) - Welcome with your first great poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:45:00 PM
Hi Senura, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:23:00 PM
Senura, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/28/2015 6:15:00 AM
Nice read. I liked your choice of words
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Senura Fernando
Date: 9/28/2015 6:17:00 AM
Thank you John Beam! :)

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