The Rose and the Blay

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L8XMv6h4Ix4 Like the last rose of summer, you carried me away Like the last rose of summer on the road to yesterday Awake and smell the roses ever gently you did say, For every heart awakens when the roses bloom in May Yes, every heart awakens, when the roses bloom in May Like the last rose of summer, you carried me away as she blooms into a slumber on the road to yesterday By the river you swim proudly on the current of His love 2x Like the last rose of summer, you slowly swim away Like the last rose in slumber, you a tiny water blay Awakened by the essence of a Mystic sweet sashay you enter into presence as you rise upon the quay. Like the last rose of summer beneath God's blessed ray you live your days of summer, then you finally drift away. 3x Meaning of Blay: A Small European Fish Lyrics by: Mystic Rose

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Date: 9/29/2022 5:35:00 PM
This is beautiful, enchanting! When stepping from the ledge of blossom, we are given wings...and the soul soars for eternity. "Like the last rose of summer beneath God's blessed ray you live your days of summer, then you finally drift away"~ Perfect!
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Date: 9/28/2022 5:25:00 PM
Gosh! This is a such a refreshingly unconventional love song, Mystic. I was carried away... Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/28/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thank you Gershon, I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 9/28/2022 9:17:00 AM
WoW! Mystic, You've penned some well written lyrics. I found them to be romantic and melancholy. Also, it flowed well, and you had good rhymes as well. Good job. Have a great day-Alexis
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Date: 9/28/2022 5:37:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by dear Alexis, always a pleasure to hear from you :)
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