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Inspired during one of my Himalaya tour

The Rose and I

Viewed from the snow covered mountain
Slopes laden with flower beds like
Colorful vase of flowers
I saw the* the Himalayan rose
I asked, “Why are you all alone?
Beauty is to be adored”
You should give yourself before
Your petals fall to dust”.

Quick came the response from rose
“Am not lonely, enjoy these heights
Shelter of blue umbrella”.
I asked if I crush your petals
Rose said he would be glad
Its fragrance will radiate.
Purpose of life fulfilled
If destroyed not admired.

As I was about to pluck it,
It said,*Stop, give a second thought”.

“If you truly love me
Better leave it on my stem
If still cannot resist the desire
Pluck me but respect the thorns
As your lady has pins and needles
In case you don’t feel me
Give it to someone but still
My fragrance will stay in your hands.”

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Date: 30-9-13
Dr. Ram Mehta
Fifth place win
Contest: The Rose (Allegory) Giorgio Veneto
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Jackson Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 2:04 PM
Lovely poem. Congratulations. Linda x
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October 23, 2013 at 9:15 PM
Hello Dr Ram, congratulations in The rose (Allegory) contest................. SKAT
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October 22, 2013 at 11:20 PM
Dr Ram, . CONGRATULATIONS... goodnight....LINDA
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October 19, 2013 at 5:33 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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October 16, 2013 at 3:48 PM
lovely images, heartfelt dialogue... Congatratulations Archontoula
Deschler Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 2:17 PM
This poem is beautifully written. Very heartfelt and tender! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind comments.
Posey Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 5:39 PM
Beautiful presentation!!! Your talent is well displayed in this fine creative verse.... Congratulations on your win.... Jake
May Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 4:02 PM
congrats on your win Dr. Mehta
Rain Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 3:47 PM
This is very spiritual , it makes me wish to go there ! I could live and eat curry for life then climb the mountain ! congratulations Doctor!
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October 15, 2013 at 7:22 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, Dr. Ram! I enjoyed reading these beautiful and wise words... Have a great day! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Maharaj Avatar
October 2, 2013 at 8:37 AM
Love this :) Beautifully written. Namaskram _/\_
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October 1, 2013 at 3:34 AM
- Beautiful picture Dr. Ram! - Have a nice autumn day. - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kearley Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 10:45 PM
Very thought provoking... Very nice. It made me want to smell the rose. Thank you also for your kind comments always.
Carrillo Avatar
September 30, 2013 at 9:42 PM
The Rose and You, or You and the Rose. A very beautiful poem about a Rose. They are very delicate, that's why they have thorns. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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