The Rose

When I found the rose covered with vines,
I reached in to touch the velvety softness
and was stung by a bee.
I was also scratched by a thorn, 
leaving a trail of blood.
I tried to draw the rose on paper
it seemed so simple, but I couldn't capture
its true beauty or the aroma on paper.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 2, 2016 at 1:35 AM
Mary Bone, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~
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October 26, 2020 at 11:45 AM
Thanks Linda! I appreciate your kind words!
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