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The Root

Malice unsated. Insatiable.
The children of the frenzy
belch poison beyond the shell,
yet suckle there at the breast
of an uncertain woman 
gratefully turned to stone;
long for a distant father
who has quietly despised them
since the uncertain womb.
Insatiable malice. Unsated.

18th June 2020

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Brian Sambourne

February 11, 2022 at 9:00 AM

A remarkably astute write. Malice is multifaceted in its origin. There is indeed an insidious root from parent to child when hate is taught + 'belches' like 'poison.' Very fine posting. Best wishes, Brian

Paul Callus

June 28, 2020 at 10:23 AM

The way I read this the children are the fruit of insatiable abuse, Lawrence....an uncooperative woman who endured but did not participate. ~ Regards // paul

Lawrence Sharp

June 28, 2020 at 10:57 AM

You are close to the mark, Paul. Human malice is handed on from one generation to the next, fathers and mothers alike failing to nurture the better angels of their offspring. Thank you for visit and very mindful comment.

Robert Lindley

June 24, 2020 at 10:24 PM

The root of malice is the invisible hand that stabs and claws weaken souls. Mankind in its race into the darkness. Seeks lusting gems hell's wicked demons extol. Of mortal flesh and brevity of life. Of greed and dark desires thought divine. Embracing evil and world's eternal strife. Drinking wine born from black-poisoned vines. Your wonderful dark piece inspires me to write my friend. A fav..

Lawrence Sharp

June 25, 2020 at 1:38 AM

Thank you, my friend. Your analysis is razor sharp.

Regina Mcintosh

June 19, 2020 at 6:00 PM

Intriguing words of profound insight. Enjoyed your words. God bless you with many more and much love sent your way, Gina

Lawrence Sharp

June 20, 2020 at 7:23 AM

Thank you very much, Regina, visit and comment appreciated.

Brandy Nicole

June 18, 2020 at 10:56 PM

"belch poison beyond the shell" There is so much truth in this. You always know how to say so much, in just a few words. This is deep and powerful. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

June 19, 2020 at 2:12 AM

Thanks, Branderz, it always pleases me if it resonates with the reader in any way.