The Room Without a Window

There is a room
where
two souls 
breathe the same light
and the shadows 
forget 
their names.

Outside,
the church bell rings 
for supper.
Inside,
no one is hungry 
only forgiven.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 3:35 PM
Hello Florin, A room without windows! I can not picture a room without windows. No one hungry, only forgiven. That is something special. Hugs. /Darlene/ My fav.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Hello Florin,You are very welcome., Thank you for the best wishes and hugs. /Darlene/
Lacatus Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words, Darlene! Sending you all my best wishes and warm hugs! :)
Daniels Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 9:12 PM
On this dimension or another or all ? Crisp, gentle message, Florin. Worth opening this pot to catch gems like these. Be blessed for your clarity, Ghairo.
Lacatus Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 9:46 PM
Thank you so much Ghairo! :)
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