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A beautiful sun floats on the horizon Signifying a rising joy Blades of grass graze by Our smiles become so coy Clouds sweep in, The grass gets stuck in our throats We turn away and close our eyes The sun is drowning and it begins to choke

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Date: 10/26/2017 3:32:00 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem Mark, hope there will be many more in the future - // S.S.
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Date: 10/16/2017 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem, it rhymes and paints beautiful nature pictures for me. But it's not ABC, because thet comes with a different set of rules. This a mix of Free Verse and Rhyme :) Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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