The Room

A beautiful sun floats on the horizon 
Signifying a rising joy
Blades of grass graze by
Our smiles become so coy

Clouds sweep in,
The grass gets stuck in our throats 
We turn away and close our eyes
The sun is drowning and it begins to choke
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 26, 2017 at 3:32 AM
- Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem Mark, hope there will be many more in the future - // S.S.
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October 16, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Beautiful poem, it rhymes and paints beautiful nature pictures for me. But it's not ABC, because thet comes with a different set of rules. This a mix of Free Verse and Rhyme :) Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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