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The Roller Coaster Ride

once again, let us have a ride. the wheel is turning round and round. too many heartaches of a broken heart. it's time for us to enjoy the ride. hold your breath tight, we'll start to soar. let's start it over, reheal the soul. this is the moment, a ride 'til the edge. hold me close honey. don't delayed happiness. on top of this ride, I'll hold your hands. and keep you secure, never I'll let you down. I will share you the feeling, you've never felt before. I'll send you to heaven, where paradise reborn. spin it slowly and make assure, we'll not miss each steps of valor. In your arms envelope me, 'til we reach the heavenly bliss. the roll is done, and breathtaking lines. life is just short, enjoy the ride! ^__^

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Date: 2/23/2014 7:44:00 PM
Dear AiyaH, The ride is to be enjoyed! Reading your version was a pleasure! My best 7 chuck
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/24/2014 7:19:00 AM
thank you so mucH ,Chuck!! ..:) glad you enjoyed it! ^__^
Date: 2/23/2014 4:19:00 PM
My husband always said he never wanted an easy life that's why he married me, it's like riding a rollar coaster ride, lol this poem is great, enjoyed the lines and when he gets home from work i will read this to him. thanks again. cheri also thanks for the great comment . cheri
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/24/2014 7:24:00 AM
Cheri... i love to see your comment again on my poem.. :') ./.it's an honor that you liked it! ..i feel proud that you shared a read to your husband... thank you so mucH!!!! ^__^ huggs!
Date: 2/23/2014 1:42:00 PM
Aiyah good metaphors of loves strong bond..I like it...David
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/24/2014 7:28:00 AM
Thank you ,David ;')
Date: 2/22/2014 5:39:00 PM
this is a beautiful analogy with life and love. Also, I LOVE roller coaster rides!!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 2/24/2014 7:29:00 AM
glad you liked it, Andrea!!! ..:') thank you so mucH!! ^__^

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