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The Rollar Coaster Ride

The roller coaster
Speeds downward quickly
Then turns upside down
Coming down quickly
To come to a stop 
Then start all over.

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Candace Hodges

October 12, 2016 at 8:16 PM

I always wanted to be on a roller coaster ride and and maybe one day I will but a roller coaster is like life it goes up and down.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 25, 2016 at 11:21 AM

Hello Candace, I am not a fan of the roller coaster ride. The one I went on was in the dark. That was my last roller coaster ride.Yes a roller coaster ride is like life. That is how I see it. I look forward to reading your poetry.

Paul Callus

October 10, 2016 at 8:57 AM

This is a good metaphor, Darlene. I doubt if anybody's life is ever plain-sailing! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 10, 2016 at 4:41 PM

Hello Paul,yes this is a good metaphor I doubt if anyone life is smooth sailing either. My life right is like a roller coaster right now,but a little better.Paul I enjoy your poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

October 5, 2016 at 3:08 PM

Nice one, Darlene. And I adore this ride!! Hope to see more and more from you!

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 6, 2016 at 1:13 PM

Thank you Andrea, I am glad you enjoyed the ride.Yes you will see more of my poetry. I enjoy writing poetry.

Carole Duet

October 4, 2016 at 6:46 PM

Sounds like my life...but "cest la vie"! (P.S. It's probably obvious I don't know French. lol) Anyway, I love roller coasters!

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 5, 2016 at 8:54 AM

Hello Carole,My life is a roller coaster ride right now.This is the reason I wrote it.I am not q fan of roller coaster rides,especially the ones that run in the dark.