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The Rollar Coaster Ride

The roller coaster Speeds downward quickly Then turns upside down Coming down quickly To come to a stop Then start all over.

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Candace Hodges

Date: 10/12/2016 8:16:00 PM

I always wanted to be on a roller coaster ride and and maybe one day I will but a roller coaster is like life it goes up and down.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2016 11:21:00 AM

Hello Candace, I am not a fan of the roller coaster ride. The one I went on was in the dark. That was my last roller coaster ride.Yes a roller coaster ride is like life. That is how I see it. I look forward to reading your poetry.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/10/2016 8:57:00 AM

This is a good metaphor, Darlene. I doubt if anybody's life is ever plain-sailing! Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/10/2016 4:41:00 PM

Hello Paul,yes this is a good metaphor I doubt if anyone life is smooth sailing either. My life right is like a roller coaster right now,but a little better.Paul I enjoy your poetry.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2016 3:08:00 PM

Nice one, Darlene. And I adore this ride!! Hope to see more and more from you!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2016 1:13:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, I am glad you enjoyed the ride.Yes you will see more of my poetry. I enjoy writing poetry.

Carole Duet

Date: 10/4/2016 6:46:00 PM

Sounds like my life...but "cest la vie"! (P.S. It's probably obvious I don't know French. lol) Anyway, I love roller coasters!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/5/2016 8:54:00 AM

Hello Carole,My life is a roller coaster ride right now.This is the reason I wrote it.I am not q fan of roller coaster rides,especially the ones that run in the dark.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/3/2016 4:27:00 PM

Roller coasters are pretty cool, when you are young. No so much when you get older. I have ridden my share. Thanks for the fun memories, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/3/2016 7:56:00 PM

I use to ride the rollar coaster in my younger days,not anymore.Now I do the Ferris Wheel.It was a fun poem to write.Your Welcome.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/3/2016 3:14:00 PM

I feel ill just looking at them at the theme parks and I have enough of a roller coaster ride in life lol !:-) hugs jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/3/2016 8:03:00 PM

Hello Jan my life to is like a roller coaster ride right now but slowly my life is getting better.I prefer the Ferris Wheel ride.