The Rock

She sat on the rocks looking out at the water
The sun reached across and she smiled as it caught her
She picked up a pebble that stood out in the sand
And fingered it lightly as it lay in her hand
It was daring like him to sparkle so brightly
She stared at it long then held it tightly
Then suddenly it cut her, it cut her fast
The cut had hurt, the hurt would last
She stared at the water as the sky went dim
Then threw in the rock for the rock was like him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:01 AM
The person in your poem had very strong hurt feelings that will last for a while. A very sad poem. Nice to meet you Kitty. have a nice day my friend.
Evans Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 1:09 PM
Images, irony and wit have done this poem well. Thanks for sharing..........................peace!
Inman Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 6:39 PM
I liked your Jester poem and decided to visit your page. If your other work is as good as this I will be well pleased. (Just a polite suggestion, check the forms tab at the top.) A wonderful first post.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 12:17 PM
This poem sings to me Kitty. A very warm welcome to Poetry Soup! No heart, no soul...I love the metaphor! : )
Sands Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Also, Welcome to poetry soup. Keep up the writing :)
Lou Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:40 AM
Thanks!
Sands Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Interesting how you wrote this. :)
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