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The Rock

Furious feelings Hieves of anger Big brown eyes, stare into dim reflection Others pass and go, but her, the rock stares at nothing A flickering box, alive and loud That never dies, but makes you desend, slowly Your eyes become red, like blood But her, the rock seeming to be paralized blood storm clouded eyes stuck on the box She is yet still alive, but gone Leaving a ghost a whisper in the wind, footsteps in a parade, ..........alone....... But her, the rock is bold and tough but not all bad you trip on her, but use her as a step Fall down when climbing, but still you got up there A chair to sit on a hazard, a boulder a stone the rock

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/1/2010 6:15:00 PM
Nice poem. I Am Me is about my dad
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:26:00 AM
I like this! It's very vivid.
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Date: 1/9/2010 9:00:00 AM
Welcome to PS, Lea! Great imagery and flow! By the way, I love your name! Some add an "h" at the end! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/8/2010 4:48:00 PM
Good use of imagery to share your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/8/2010 11:01:00 AM
hmmm, no more poems of yours for me to see! ANyway, glad I could make you laugh!! thanks for reading my limerick. Andrea
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Date: 1/8/2010 10:25:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Lea. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/7/2010 8:41:00 PM
I hope I am getting the meaning of this one. It kind of reminded me of the movie Precious, and I hope I am not way off base. It's an interesting read! Andrea
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