The Robin's Song

I wake to the soft sounds of rain tapping my window.
For several days hovering clouds have stolen the sun,
And I am thinking they portend sorrow lying ahead.
I hear a robin singing, so rare when the sky is gray,
With indomitable spirit, the bird keeps up its melody
And, suddenly, my heart begins to sing its own tune. 

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June 4, 2021
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Balasubramanian Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Even I love the song of Robin I hear daily. Beautiful. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Thank you so very much, Rama. I always appreciate receiving an insightful comment from you.
Seeker Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Drawing in the music by magnetic resonance! Congrats Milton!
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:24 AM
Thanks so much, Unseeking Seeker.
Alex Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Thanks for your thoughts, Christuraj.
Wolf Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 8:06 PM
I like this one. So soft and sweet. ~ Gershon
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Thanks, G.W. Yeah, it is, isn't it?
Krutsinger Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 5:21 AM
A "song in my heart" happens a lot when I hear a robin trilling, so this one hits me.
Hankins Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Thanks, Caren.
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